'Which Essay did you like best?'
The Essay I liked best so far was 'The Suitcase Lady' by Christine McLaren. It was short and sweet, and while I did not like the use of one-sided dialogue, it still had dialogue. It is also descriptive: you start out with a mental image of the main character, with 'red hair and the purple dress'.
Albeit not complete, you still get some elements through the story to add to that image. I hightly dislike stories that hammer you with a too detailed description, or jump into action, leaving ou clue-less. I do not like the use of poor grammar, personally, but it helps. It gives the story a certain feel, and characterizes the suitcase lady.
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